@nils97866

“maybe use fewer, thicker cracks radiating from the fist with a clearer glow, so the punch reads before the effect details.”

“idk if the proportions are what feels off, maybe stretch the torso up and swing one arm back so the gear 2 lean has room instead of stacking everything in the middle.”

“idk if every fold needs to be there, maybe block the robe and sash as two big shapes first, then let a few folds follow them so the costume reads before it goes flat”

“idk if more shoe detail helps first, maybe draw the foot as a wedge then wrap the sole around that bottom plane so it feels attached instead of floating under the ankle”

“maybe tip the front knee and sword hand toward the camera first, then shrink the back leg a bit so the jump reads in perspective before adding more background”

“idk if more eye detail is the fix, maybe place a simple box around each eye first and check the top and bottom edges as the head turns, then add one clear highlight shape so it stays in the same persp”

“maybe map one clear light side and one darker side on the face first, then soften the middle so the head shape stays readable while you shade”

“idk the angle already feels pretty solid for a fun break, maybe push one darker edge along the skirt folds and the hair braid so the silhouette reads clearer without adding more detail”

“maybe separate the main figure from the background with a slightly clearer light and dark split first, then let a few brighter color notes lead the eye so the perspective stays easier to read.”

“maybe block the seated figure as a few simple shapes first, then check the knee and shoulder angles against a center line before adding the values so the pose feels more balanced.”

“maybe start with a soft ball for each shoulder and hang the upper arm off that like a simple tube. right now the arm kinda starts near the neck so it never plugs in. once that ball is there the elbow ”

“color and outfit design are already past beginner honestly. the thing holding it back for me is depth, everything sits at about the same value so the bear and the coat blend. maybe pick one light dire”

“design wise she reads clear, the shy crybaby part maybe less so. both poses are kinda confident with the peace sign. one version with hands pulled in closer, shoulders up a bit, would sell that side. ”

“the glossy eyes already sell the new style. maybe the hoodie and the bunny are sitting in the same pink though, a cooler shadow under her chin would separate the hug and keep the face as the focus”

“the walk already reads well. maybe pin the folds to two or three points, shoulders and where it catches the leg, and let the rest hang. helps it feel like cloth reacting to the step instead of a flat ”

“the tilt already reads. maybe a darker plane under the chin and letting the hair wrap the skull would lock the angle in more than extra spikes”

“the mask already feels future facing. idk if the coat needs to match that though, a softer older looking coat might sell the prefers the past part”

“The peacock already does a lot of the colorful welcoming work. Could a quieter outfit on Sebastian keep him from getting lost?”