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“halo that how accurate as i can do but that only me”

“halo ,my way of drawing curl thing is to draw them and light them like buttle croissant”

“i actually like the old brat look of the old one but you redraw give another feel and more dynamic pose of it gg”

“cant help with gender things but i would said color is good ,face is good just review you head perspective than add the back head hair and all good”

“try to work more with the light and shadow of the drawing”

“think of it as large shapes and try find the shape it look the most , used large curve line and stray line”

“i would said you color is good but the value can be work on , try to darker you shadow and add detaill like how you did the light hairy style”

“when drawing hair never do only one small hair, if you do hair comite to draw all the hair or it will not look correct , 3/4 angle is generally better in composition”

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“i generally do seperation by half or parralele”

“i would prioritize composition and priority the character as main subject need to be in the front , than the mountain than the geant oil rig , dont fear exageration if you want , really depend on how”

“i would try to see the full place even outside the canvas to better draw it correctly”