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“I enlarge her nostril a little. Changed her brows and her eyes.”

“I change a little bit of his facial expression and add some shades.”

“Raise the arms in the same level as the head so that the hands touch the sword handle. The wing part of the pelvis spread outward while the other part for its abdominal close inward.”

“I changed the ribcage and the pelvis from your original sketch.”

“Lowered the pectoralis major (chest) to the end of the blade of sternum and tuck it along with the deltoid (shoulder). For the right arm holding the sword. Bend the forearm close to the upper arm so”

“The female pilot (upper left corner): 1. You drew three cubes in correct position and angles are perfect. 2. It seems you have trouble to find the correct angles for her legs and feet. I drew guides”

“Hi there! My English isn't that good. It'll be great if we chat in the discord room if you like to learn more of this technique I'm doing here. Let me know when time to talk and where to discuss about”