@jeremy59277920

“Your colors are nice, but they are quite mid toned, which is giving the piece a bit of a dusty/hazy vibe. A couple of little tricks I use when checking my colours: - Check your image in greyscal”

“I'd love to know more about this piece. Without knowing what you want to achieve, there's not much direction we can give. At the moment, the composition is feeling quite pushed to the left and foc”

“Edit - My paintover got cropped (changed image dimensions to add a breakdown). Here's the paintover:”

“Morning! First off: awesome character + rendering. Nice job. It depends on what you want the pose to embody - but with some tweaks you can push the line of action a little more to give you a bi”