@chiara

“You are already doing a great job! The messy lines are the result of trying to find the pose. I think they happen because those are hard poses and they require us to really think about how the body is”

“You’re on the right track! You have a good quality line, you understand form and its contours. I can also see that you have a good grasp of the fundamentals like anatomy and the Loomis method. The one”

“This already looks really good! Your forms are really good and solid, you simplified it well and the proportions are also good. The main issue here in my opinion is the perspective. This is a really d”

“You’re already doing a great job! I noticed that your neck is a bit long. When we look from below or above, forms overlap and become foreshortened. So the neck is not as long as we would see it in a n”