I really love the energy and gesture of this animal. the design works very well, and is very cute! Could be a pixar character! Also love the colours! I think the drawing would benefit by having some more form-indication. Could be done by some clever crosscountours, or by some shading. For example, the tongue and the tail feels kinda flat. (the tail moves the viewers to the dragon, and is thus a focus point.) Leaving the tongue flat however has some charm to it! So if that's intentionally, it is a fun design choice! (I am around the same skill level as you, so i am not an expert or whatsoever!)

make the tail slightly longer curved like covering the fore paw , it will feel more . the eyes are shaped in perspective. it is good and awesome creature design

@nika44822599Il y a 2 mois

Interesting design! My version is a little different, and I changed your design a bit during the process :D I think I actually prefer your design more, but the main thing I wanted to improve was the line quality. I hope it helps in some way.

@n0ovaIl y a 2 mois

I love what you did here and I love the line quality even more, I think this helps in giving the forms more definition and volume like with the wings, thank you!

@soren50560244Il y a 2 mois

I really love the energy and gesture of this animal. the design works very well, and is very cute! Could be a pixar character! Also love the colours! I think the drawing would benefit by having some more form-indication. Could be done by some clever crosscountours, or by some shading. For example, the tongue and the tail feels kinda flat. (the tail moves the viewers to the dragon, and is thus a focus point.) Leaving the tongue flat however has some charm to it! So if that's intentionally, it is a fun design choice! (I am around the same skill level as you, so i am not an expert or whatsoever!)

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