The hatching is kinda chaotic i would say. Having a lot of directions for your lines make the hatching appear more like random scribble. Don't forget than other that the direction, you can also use different pressure on your pencil and/or different distance between each line to make them appear more or less and so a darker or lighter value. But that's already a nice start ! Keep it going ! :)

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Himadri Shekhar Barman · 2026-09-20T00:12:50.287Z

I tried to keep my sphere as same as my form but I dont know something is still not good, my hatching or values.

The hatching is kinda chaotic i would say. Having a lot of directions for your lines make the hatching appear more like random scribble. Don't forget than other that the direction, you can also use different pressure on your pencil and/or different distance between each line to make them appear more or less and so a darker or lighter value. But that's already a nice start ! Keep it going ! :)

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