Breakdown of form.

Slowly improving graphic designer here. I’m still trying to tune my eye without the use of a reference. Can ya help a brother out and highlight which areas I need to improve on, and perhaps sketch in the proper correction if you have the energy to do so?

PNGTuber Revamp

I'm trying to revamp my PNGTuber and something about the face/eyes seem uncanny, like it's not expressive enough, but just also just. not right in general. any help with her facial expression would be really helpful!

armour

Hi, I'm not sure if the values ​​are good or if there's a problem with the shadows or rendering.

Re

I just want general anatomy/ lighting feedback!

Floyd

Anatomy, perspective and rendering hair. I want to see if this is an accurate way to show a head tilted back.

Bloodborne oc

Im not really happy with the lighting since i cant really understand how it works

little monstersss

Last night, i took the pot that holds my plant and turned the form into this sort of creature/monster. Now, i would say i did a good job with the organic/dynamic form here, but for the little drawing of the monster battling the long-necked creature, i have a slight hunch that i did something wrong with the angle, i just know it! To me, it feels like it's not anchored in perspective well. Oh, and don't mind the lil martian dude at the corner, he's stinky and we don't want to associate with him. Anyway, if you guys have feedback, please let me know!

Michael in graphite

Shading, edges and proportion

Commissioned piece

I recently made a commission piece I was really happy with, aside from the designs I was given free reign. I'm very happy with the posing and shading but I also want feedback on the colors and posing or just anything in general as I've been looking to make my art more unique but also keeping the core elements of my style (chunky limbs and feet). Is there any feedback with anything here that's worth noting I can look to improve in the future?