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Améliore tes ombres et ta maîtrise de la lumière, 3 min de lecture
Master pen and ink rendering through four progressive exercises: build value scales, shade basic forms, study organic objects, and create imaginary inventions using texture and light.
Rendering


String
I am pretty happy with my character and her rendering but am wondering how i can improve the background sakura tree. (it just looks like cotton candy) I want to know how to improve especially since im entering art in high school next year.

Sleeping fairy
I feel like when I zoom in on the sleeping girl, it looks fine, but zoomed out there is a lot of dimension missing. I'm also unsure about the floor. Thanks for any tips :)

chess piece
I would like to get feedback of structure of my drawing and shadows which I know are bad.(Btw this was drawn from real life reference not photo) Thank you in advance.

Leaf green fan sketch
Congratulations get the hair right

Please help with my cylinders:(
I tried to avoid too many lines. My cylinders looks a bit off… is it very important to get them super realistic to be able to draw characters? What should I aim for……

field
I'm confused as to what's wrong with this work. It could be the perspective, the form, or the shading of the characters.

Feedback on head study
I did some rembert montald study recently and i try to apply what i've learn from that study but i don't know why after learning some new hatching thecnique and did some Skull study i still feel the head is a bit flat, any tips to make the head a bit more 3d??

Untitled
I think the nose looks a little wrong and the other parts have something wrong but I can't seem to put my finger on what exactly is wrong

I'm a beginner
I'm not sure what's wrong with the proportions of the face