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Améliore tes ombres et ta maîtrise de la lumière, 3 min de lecture
Master pen and ink rendering through four progressive exercises: build value scales, shade basic forms, study organic objects, and create imaginary inventions using texture and light.
Rendering


chess piece
I would like to get feedback of structure of my drawing and shadows which I know are bad.(Btw this was drawn from real life reference not photo) Thank you in advance.

Leaf green fan sketch
Congratulations get the hair right

Please help with my cylinders:(
I tried to avoid too many lines. My cylinders looks a bit off… is it very important to get them super realistic to be able to draw characters? What should I aim for……

field
I'm confused as to what's wrong with this work. It could be the perspective, the form, or the shading of the characters.

Feedback on head study
I did some rembert montald study recently and i try to apply what i've learn from that study but i don't know why after learning some new hatching thecnique and did some Skull study i still feel the head is a bit flat, any tips to make the head a bit more 3d??

Untitled
I think the nose looks a little wrong and the other parts have something wrong but I can't seem to put my finger on what exactly is wrong

I'm a beginner
I'm not sure what's wrong with the proportions of the face

citrus reference sheet
something just feels so off about him, maybe its the pose maybe its the proportions i have no idea why he looks so constipated

Creature portrait practice
Here it is after receiving feedback! I’m so grateful for the advice and I’m so much happier with this piece <3