I advice deciding where the light comes from, findinga reference and following it, copying which planes of the face are the ones that are liut and the one that are not,. also have more contrast between light and shadow, or between warm vs cold light. you can also justify the lighting by drwing the light source in the background, and for composition i made the moons smaller nd different sise4s, and pout them on the side that he is looking at. i also made the border detween shadow and light f the face a more saturated color toa ccount for subsurface scattering, which gives the skin more life. same for the highlithgs ont he eyes, gives more life to the character. | Artwod Feedback