Hi, I tried to give the hair a different shape. And added some more texture. I also moved the eyes slightly down. I hope it helps. Your drawing is very beautiful :)

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Vernon Randall · 2026-07-02T02:49:41.793Z

I’m really struggling with painting hair, clothes and hands for the first time. I’ve never tried a line-less full render style before and while I’ve mapped out some of the light, I just feel I always struggle with the darker darks 😔 there’s a lot about this that I’m going to eventually shift (ie I feel like the eyes are just slightly too high) but I don’t even know where to begin with the clothes, hands and hair 😭 pls be nice to me dawg im so nervous posting this LMAO

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