Hey, the placement for the features seems largely correct. You could think about shifting the nose and mouth a little bit more upwards, as you currently have a somewhat lengthy middle section of her face. Other than that, mostly the eyebrow that is trying to squish between hair and eye disturbs the cohesive image. For the hair, the flatness comes from adding only flat color and just very few shadow shapes and highlights. Try to break up the large blocks a little bit, indicating smaller hairstrands or even an individual stray hair here and there. The same goes for the blocky shadow shapes, as the hair strands cluster together and spread apart, a few sharper, pointier edges would help a lot I think. | Artwod Feedback