I'd say theres many tiny thing to say about this one, but I'll stick to the most broad and relevant things. -Planes You want to take into account the planes of the face in order to get an accurate value structure in there, you won't get a clear read of the face without it. -Transitions This one is also related to the planes, unless you are doing a heavy contrast study there will usually be gradients in the forms at the transitions from one plane to another. -Subtle Saturation I feel like this is not a huge problem here but theres some heavy jumps of suturation where you get an accurate saturation and next to it a color thats too greyish (I'm talking like 10%-20% more greyish than it should be) Usually on a face you want to see some amount of vibrant colors even if it's just a little (notice the cheek for example) But, the main thing are the planes, thats why you don't want to speed run the drawing, even if you get the proportions and likeness a bit wrong, you need to make sure you get how the form is turning around. I really hope this helps, I'd also suggest to use some other type of brush, one that is a bit more sharp on its edge, not fully sharp though. | Artwod Feedback