My og reply got deleted but a few tips Try blocking out your shadow and where the light iw coming from, block the haor and render small parts implying complexity with strokes!- Our minds are easily folled by implied complexity in art its great. I made the light brighetr to add contrast using greyscale to see what to focus on. Great rendering overall just need use of complex colours :3
I acidentally made the jaw small in the pen line lol but the jaw was fine just had to ljquify the face closer (so looks like i took away tye mew jaw 🫠🫠

