Hello hello! It's an ok learning path but I would avoid approaching clients until you get solid foundations for each subject: linework, color, shading, perspective, anatomy etc. Client usually demand a bit more quality work than what you already have. Overall, the artwork appeared overly dark. The majority of the shadows will be on the figure's edge because of the intense frontal light. When creating shadows, avoid using dark colors as this will make the artwork appear muddy and unnatural. Depending on the kind of light you are utilizing, switch to either warm colors (a combination of orange and yellow) or cool colors (mainly blues but stay away from purple). For a cleaner result, keep each phase distinct: linework, flat colors, shadows, light, and background. Keep in mind that since the figure is three-dimensional, we must see its volume. When painting different characters, outfits, and hairstyles, always consult references. You will get better over time and be able to take on client work! In order to make painting easier later in your artistic journey, start small and build solid foundations! Hope it helps and happy learning! | Artwod Feedback