@saritos

Peindre

Hello hello! Not gonna lie, your friend is right, the character does look a bit in a special mood but nothing that can't be fixed! You need little tweaks: Pay attention to how you arrange wrinkles around your eyes. We can tell that the character is young, but if you want to make them appear older, we normally draw a line under the eyes, around the mouth and nose, and in the outer corner of the eyes. Characters should elevate their eyebrows and eyes to prevent a drowsy appearance. When in doubt, return your face to a neutral look. Your current mouth is visible from below rather than from the front, which is how it should be. Regardless of style, the Rilley or Loomis methods can be used for basic construction before adding style. That will help you in constructing your desired face but also very important for hair placement. Hair wraps the head and falls down in the shape of bigger stripes.Treat the hair as abstract forms rather than individual strands by dividing it into smaller, more manageable portions or clumps. Define the hair's exterior contour, or silhouette, to make sure it fits properly on the head. This is usually done by first defining the primary, massive locks.Create threads that move in various directions to add flair and vitality. Hope it helps! Cool character!