Hey there! Good job! I really liked how you divided the card using the spear. :D Although I think it would be interesting if, instead of using conventional spearheads, you used the shape of the "Black Sword" symbol, just like you did on the shield. :D You could also use that symbol on the handguard. Now, I corrected the pose and the armor because, overall, the torso looked a little off, and because of that, the armor wasn't wrapping around the body properly. Remember that you should always draw the base of the character first, even if you're only using simple shapes. This will give you a more solid foundation for the character's perspective and proportions. Notice how, by drawing the base first, the armor fits around the body much better. :) Hope this helps! PS: I like your card :) Can't promise it, but I'll see if I can complement it! | Artwod Feedback