To be honest, I think you just need to layer your artwork differently. I see the lighting coming from the front right of the image and you aren’t far off there. Just some tweaks to the dark side as well as the side where the shorter girl comes in front of the other, will cause a cast shadow there. The scale of the green haired girl would also be something to adjust. Nice piece here. Good job.
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A Winter Art Collab with my bestfriend
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As I combined our finished artworks, I fail to make it seem like I'm walking behind her. The green hair girl is not supposed to be incredibly tall. Furthermore, I believe the lighting needs fixing. It's kind of difficult to identify where the source of light is located. Maybe the colors and shadows need fixing as well. Honestly speaking, I may not be able to see other weak areas, but you, other fellow artists–can. You have eyes of your own. Please help me, whether it may be in proportions, coloring, perspective, and other things necessary. Thanks!
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