There is a few important things that show up 1. Composition - I think this piece would look much better in a vertical canvas where you can show off full body postures (more than that in league splash composition is the 1st thing that makes or breaks it) so before starting a drawing I recommend doing 2-4 thumbnails Aaron Min has some robust tutorials on it (also you can use cloud shapes to point back at the characters) 2.Don't run form your drawing hands responsibilities :) (seriously it will be easier to learn when you need to draw them along other things) 3.Color see how there is such a low saturation on these characters ? Light color is pure white and shadow color is grey - that is called muddy shading. Take a look how the environment around them is all blue and white and this blue should be present in both bounce light and shadow zones Hope this helps! | Artwod Feedback