1/ id push the local value of the hair so theres better contrast beween the coral inthe hair and the hair itself 2/ push the shading in the face, the face is like an egg, the values fall off subtely as you go more to the bottom or edges 3/ the arms arms are a bit small as is the whole torso. get some references, scapulas and rotator cuff muscles should be more visible as the arms go backward 4/ reflected light belongs to the shadow values and should be lighter than the darkest light 5/ placements of the fins feels a little stiff, maybe simplify a bit and add some organic movement and it will feel like shes underwater more, you did it right on that big fish under her. awesome work! | Artwod Feedback