This is really bautiful and kinda hard to give feedback on! But I found something! The big shape in the right, I am not sure what it is and it touches the octopus, not sure if thats intented. I feel the white stroke around that shape makes it pop a bit too much, it would have benefit more from being subtle like you did the terrain under water. Like they could be clouds or something, then the white outline could circumvent the mermaids silhoute and then she will pop better. And maybe she coul touch the boat playfully, I feel we need to see her other arm somehow. :) | Artwod Feedback