I seem to be unable to edit my submission, but I would like to add that any other feedback would be appreciated as well! I really wanna use this piece as a means to learn from :)
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Hey Cal, Awesome work on this especially the cast shadows, so dynamic, interesting silhouette and compression of values. My only nit pick is be mindful of the pure white but in this case it makes sense from the bright spotlight over-exposure. I'd say you can definitely move to color. All the best and keep going!
Hi Cal, Firstly, awesome work. This is a really cool idea with an interesting story. I love the moodiness and uncertainty of whats going to happen. I'm still very much on my learning journey in terms of art and drawing the figure so consider this feedback lightly. I tried my best to draw basic mannequins to represent them. Something I notice the legs/tail of the mermaid feels like it doesn't have much gravity or bend down after the hips. That being said do mermaids have femoral bones or not?? Gosh anatomy. Overall well done and keep it up! I look forward to see the end result.
Seeing you draw it out makes it so much more sense than whatever i was doing on my underdrawing (^^ゞ Thanks so much for the help, Grant! It looks much more organic that way. I'll get to applying it right away :)
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You're welcome. I'm glad it helps Yeah whenever I start getting overwhelmed by perspective and complex poses etc. I always try to simplify to "work out" my understanding or issue and then with a better understanding it mostly seems easier taking it further.
Mermay piece
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Grayscale but update, i doubt i can comlete it in time D: Any feedback welcome!
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