Hey! It's been a long time since I last went to a coffee shop to sketch people. I should do that again... Anyway, this is just a suggestion, but when you're drawing people from life, I think it's better to focus on the gesture rather than the structure. After all, the person you're drawing won't stay in the same pose for very long, and concentrating on the gesture will help you capture the moment much more effectively. Later on, you can always redraw the sketch and focus on refining the proportions and construction using a more structured approach, just like you've done here. Hope this helps! :) | Artwod Feedback