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Peindre

Solid page, I love that the objects are related for the same page but that's personal preference. The car/truck looks great as a base, I noticed those little things The grille, bumper, and headlights are nearly symmetrical left-to-right, which only happens in pure frontal view. But the body is angled, so the front plane should turn slightly and the far side should compress. The two front wheels sit at different heights and angles without a shared horizon, so the front end feels tilted rather than planted. The headlights are drawn as equal circles. On an angled form the far one should read as a narrower ellipse. Line quality: your instinct is right. Find the form lightly, then do one slower confident pass over the lines you want and leave the rest faint. For the hips: before any clothing or outline, block the pelvis as a simple box or bucket and draw its top plane and front plane. Once that form exists in 3D, the tilt and rotation become obvious, and the belt and contour just follow the box. The construction lines aren't extra work, they're what makes the twist readable. I definitely think that the 30 days of sketchbooking will boost your confidence and line quality ! :)