I love your finished product! I recommend, however, definitely giving each line a purpose, like you pointed out already. Especially on the dress, make sure the lines are intentional for your folds and make sense, rather than just random lines.
This is how I draw it now. If you see any mistakes, please feel free to edit them. I'll definitely appreciate it.
I love your finished product! I recommend, however, definitely giving each line a purpose, like you pointed out already. Especially on the dress, make sure the lines are intentional for your folds and make sense, rather than just random lines.