You have really advanced with your form, anatomy, shadows, and especially story as well! With the first you have biker guy speeds across highway for some reason and oh hey a turtle, while with the new one you can tell he has come to a skidding stop because of the turtle and you draw people in with the question of why the turtle has a magic staff, what will the guy do, etc, all much more intriguing! Only critique, I think that the light from the staff would affect the lighting/shadows much more, especially with reflections on the bike. | Artwod Feedback