Hello I don't think it is as bad as you think. What seems weird for me is that I feel the torso is both twisted and not twisted at the same time. I think you need to make clearer pose for that. The anatomy is great by the way ;) Also I would push the foreshortening of the legs for better effect. I hope my poor paint over helps. I need to improve my mannequin

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Drew Wingfield · 2026-10-27T06:25:10.659Z

Hi all! Theres a lot wrong here. The hands are weird. The perspective isnt great, the gesture could be more dynamic and kinetic, but I still like it. Please, any and all feedback welcome :)

@aherveHier

Hello I don't think it is as bad as you think. What seems weird for me is that I feel the torso is both twisted and not twisted at the same time. I think you need to make clearer pose for that. The anatomy is great by the way ;) Also I would push the foreshortening of the legs for better effect. I hope my poor paint over helps. I need to improve my mannequin

@drew10046738Il y a 18 heures

Aubrey! Whats up dude! Thanks for the kind words and feedback :) I completely see what you mean about the torso, it itself isnt twisted but the arms present as if it is. Ill work on some gesture for sure. This is good feedback. Yeah the foreshortening is where im struggling. That would certainly add the “speed” to this figure. Your paint over is great man. Thanks again :)

@aherveIl y a 15 heures

Réponse à @drew10046738

Thanks :)

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