The Shepard is spectacular! And Cortana is good too (maybe you could have drawn her see-thtought since it's a hologram) My main issue is with the military man. The pose is strange you cannot have the arm at 180° like that, it hurts. You have to twist the neck a little and have one arm more in front) My paint over is not great to show that. Sorry. Hope it helps

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Drew Wingfield · 2026-10-24T09:06:27.997Z

Hey again! This may be a niche reference but Halo 2 is one of my all time fav games and this is the first scene I thought of with the prompt. Aside from that, im happy overall, I think this is a decent drawing. But of course maybe I missed something! Feedback is always welcome :)

@aherveIl y a {{count} jours

The Shepard is spectacular! And Cortana is good too (maybe you could have drawn her see-thtought since it's a hologram) My main issue is with the military man. The pose is strange you cannot have the arm at 180° like that, it hurts. You have to twist the neck a little and have one arm more in front) My paint over is not great to show that. Sorry. Hope it helps

@drew10046738Il y a {{count} jours

Thanks as always! Yeah I see it clear as day now that you pointed it out. I appreciate you man :). Ill work on this in the future!

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