Hi, very nice character design and execution of it. Here is my overpaint: Generally to move it forward I would suggest adding more volume in all forms, by introducing second shadow value. Talking about values I would recommend making white elements less bright, in order to have them pop use more saturated colors. Reason being there is too much focal points when it is so much white. Lastly I would spend some time working on her face and sclothing, there is a lot of uncertainty of a structural design of it. what goes wher, and how the form of it turns. Hope that will help, keep up the good work! | Artwod Feedback