Hey there! Great job so far! :D Just a couple of corrections: The facial features were a little too small, while the hair was taking up a large portion of the face. The legs were also quite long and thick, which made them look huge, and the hand was too small. What I did was adjust these proportions, first by making the facial features slightly larger and reducing the volume of the hair. I also shortened the legs to make the character look more proportional. :) I also adjusted the gestures a bit. I also added a bit of color and improved the line quality (although my linework isn't that great either. My heavy hand doesn't really help, hehe). Hope this helps! | Artwod Feedback