Hi. Really nice shading on the torso. I don't know what reference looked like but I feel like his ribcage got flattened too much. Serratus might be positioned a bit too high. His belly (particularly belly button) might be missing a bit of defintion which leads to it looking like it slid to the side. Where does light come from that illuminates his neck (see turquoise)? I didn't paint over, just marked points that could be looked at. | Artwod Feedback