This was a small challenge for me ypur lighting is spectacular. I made the pose more dunamic and made ghe face feel a bit more expressing with eye closing. The darkeninb i did isnt great cause i did it in app but it helps draw focus to the light. Centerd the flower . Hope this helps a tad

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Sunkaku · 2026-08-01T02:32:14.583Z

hello! i finished this piece and i feel like there's some stuff i can improve but i can't quite spot my mistakes, can i get some help with the figure and perspective? maybe colors aswell, but my main difficult is that the pose feels off. thanks for any help!

@comorantloverIl y a 2 mois

This was a small challenge for me ypur lighting is spectacular. I made the pose more dunamic and made ghe face feel a bit more expressing with eye closing. The darkeninb i did isnt great cause i did it in app but it helps draw focus to the light. Centerd the flower . Hope this helps a tad

@sunkakuIl y a 2 mois

Thank you so much for the feedback! I love the expression and it surely makes her more expressive :D i surely need to focus on expressions next

@comorantloverIl y a 2 mois

Réponse à @sunkaku

Can't wait to see your progress keep going your doing so well

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