@awking

Peindre

I think you have a very cool drawing made. I wouldn’t change anything if you were to painting it. But you could refine the hands and shoes if you wanted to have just the lineart. I had fun adding colours to your drawing. 1. Local colours 2. Shadow and light shapes ( only sharp edges, no blending) 3. Softening edges where needed. 4. Added lines to emphasise the silhouette. 5. Added some details. I added most details and saturation in the face to draw attention to it. (Focal point). This is how I would push it.