I really like your hatching! It looks really good and the character is very nice. I thought the pose was a little awkward and didn't quite look like he was on the chair. I think it's because the perspective was weird so I tried fixing that. It looks like his lower body is in a wide lens and the everything else is long lens. Try to keep in mind where your horizon line and vanishing points are! His left arm also felt like it started at his ribs. It was a bit low on his body. It's a really good piece. I like his accessories. Keep at it!
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