Hi! Love your style of drawing here, there's so much detail! I think there's a few things that I would usually comment on like the glare in the shades being maybe more extreme than what is realistic, but honestly it fits the style so well, that the rule of cool wins. About the hand, I think it can just be a little bit more relaxed. The fingers were pressed very tightly together and it felt like they were all going into a point, but when eating with chopsticks, it's actually quite a relaxed pose. By trying it out yourself, you'll notice a few other things like, the chopsticks can't be stuck together while eating (otherwise you can't pick anything up). As for the details, you can keep the same ones, just make sure to follow the curve of the fingers a little bit more. This will make it feel less flat and therefor more realistic! Thanks for submitting! | Artwod Feedback