Hey there! What a great piece, I love this 80's poster vibe! I used the light source to seperate the figures a little bit more and create more depth like in the arm/hair/... Added some bounce light into the face on the left as well, so mainly minor tweaks! Try to group/simplify the small folds and bumps a little bit more, otherwise it can get noisy pretty fast. The last thing I changed was the visor, I curved it a bit so the red line looks like it is curving more around the volume of the head. Thanks for submitting! | Artwod Feedback