Hi there! What an epic submission! I don't think there are any major things that need improving other than what has already been said in the other great feedbacks, so I'll be nitpicky! I think implementing a bit more of the colour their magic casts onto the characters would be great to tie the piece further together. Other than that I also drew 2 red cirles on the character on the right, one is to soften that bicep a little bit as the harsh line feels like the form is a bit too extreme, and the other is to slightly seperate the hair shape from the sideburns. They felt a bit like one shape before, which could bring along confusion in depth. It's an absolute brilliant piece though, thanks for submitting it, I would definitely read this comic! | Artwod Feedback