Hi hi! Nice shots! Too bad Mihawk got an unfortunate end :0 he is my fav character! You have a good base,now is a matter to push forward. Start with linework. I would play with linewright to push dynamism. Use thin lines to indicate lightened surfaces and ticker for focal points + shadows. Along with it,don't forget to add occlusions where light doesn't reach at all (dont overdo it). Next i would suggest adding flat colors. Now this may be personal preference but you can have versions with and without colors. Here light from side could suit more to scene and make it less flat result. Depending on what type of mood you want to present,we pick our main light. Arrange the shadows with multiple layer, match the core shadow to the character elements, and use a neutral color for the shadows (typically warm for cool light and cold for warm light). Have in mind how you shape the shadow: they have to follow construction you had with linework. We break down to simple forms (spheres, cylinders, triangles, and squares) when approaching placement with shadows. Hope it helps! | Artwod Feedback