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I think it isn't clear what direction the light is coming from. It seems to be coming from above, but there aren't many strong shadows and there seem to be shadows where there shouldn't be. See where I marked on the raised leg, for example. In general, try to think of the basic 3d form (boxy, cylindrical, etc) of each form that you're rendering and shade it accordingly.
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June Sketchbook Challenge Day 5
Hello, Here is my submission for day 5 of the June Sketchbook challenge. I am once again very happy with the result! If you happen to be part of the gaming community and watched a certain presentation today, you might know why I'm drawing some Tifa from Final Fantasy 7 and some Ryu! I am very happy with this sketch, because I realized at the end of the day that I hadn't drawn yet, but I managed to fit this in. I am happy with the posing. I definitely spent more time refining the the largest figure so the other two have poorer line quality. I honestly don't have a specific issue that's bugging me with this piece, but I know it's lacking in fundamentals in areas like anatomy and probably more. So I'll let whatever jumps out at you be the subject for feedback, Thank you!
Elven Knight
Probably spent too long on this sketch which i`ll soon colour and render.