@saritos

Peindre

Hi Hi Both panels look cool! I urge you to experiment with various approaches of depicting the big moments. Although I am not an expert in manga, I am somewhat familiar with the western comic style. We usually provide a double spread (double page) to tell the entire story for significant scenes like this one. It might be a fight or just the build-up to one. For this reason, we aim to give readers all the information (at least what is required for the next scene). You can use small thumbnails of both pages before diving in creation. That way you have a layout on how things will go. Its a common practice in comic creation. Beside that, here I mostly focus on figure drawing. You have some foundation but its good to come back to basics: which is mannequin building. Start with a simple mannequin with a geometric shape. It will help you understand how each component interacts and overlaps with the volume of a human form. Later on in your artistic path, it will be quite helpful to have a good understanding of the fundamental structure of the human form. Drawing people in any situation will not be difficult for you. The Loomis approach is one way to learn it and you can help yourself with Artwod exercises. Hope it helps!