You got to follow your construction more, especially when it comes to the rule of thirds, make sure the hairline to brow line, to nose are equal in length as for the jaw you can add a diagonal rather than straight line that connects into the centreline of the side plane. for eyes focus on drawing the shape of the eyes themselves rather than the shape and proportions of the skull underneath, looking at reference always helps. for the air placement it goes out from the centreline of the side plane as well. For the nose focus on building up the structure properly and think about how the nose bridge connects into the eyebrows, but overall good work, you're getting the hang of it! | Artwod Feedback