Your drawing skill is really good! The anatomy on the arm is really nice as well. I do think your values do kind of blend together around the legs and with the background so I changed up the contrast to make them stand out. I think the upper body was done pretty well! Aside from your values, I think your colours are a little too literal. They don't quite look like they exist in the same image-- or more like, they all have different lighting environments. The easiest way to fix this is to desaturate everything. I brought in a bit of magenta to balance everyting. I think i went a bit overboard on the green, but you can sort of see what I mean. Lastly, I did fix the lighting on the sword. It might help to look at reference of how light interacts with reflective, hard edge surfaces. I didn't do a perfect job, but I hope this was somewhat helpful!
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