Hi! First of all: Fantastic work, I love it! I really like the character design and pose. I can’t say much about the rendering, it’s miles better than mine. I have done same tweaks with the right cheek and the orientation of the corset. They felt off. The left braid seamed also a bit too far to the front. What you could also do is changing to light to a more yellow colour to match the lantern glass. I imagine that such a lantern also doesn’t shine that bright,so that’s why I made the background darker. I hope it helps!