This is so good. Doing an ambitious pose like this is so admirable! If you keep doing stuff like this and focusing on drawing, you're going to be one of the best fr. This is a difficult pose, but hopefully I can help! You were really close! What seemed to happen was that your proportions were slightly off. If you were to imagine your character from the side, they'd be extremely long. I think this happened because you didn't draw the hips in the correct perspective.The hips should be tilted backward, but you have them tilted forward. You can tell by how the belt wraps around her. Try to imagine or even draw the side view and where the camera would be and you'll be able to see which parts of the character would be hidden behind other parts of her when you foreshorten and which way parts of her should be tilted. -For example, you'll notice that if we referenced the side view I drew on the left, you'd realise we'd barely see her calf and foot as it's hidden behind her thigh. -There are also some tricks when learning proportions that can help you moving forward! 1)The crotch is located halfway between the top of the head and the bottom of the feet. (If you were draw a rectangle and then an X through it, you'd find the center point.) 2)The elbows line up a little below the ribcage at the waist. 3)The wrists line up at the crotch. 4)The tips of your fingers reach about halfway down your thigh. 5)The pectorals take up about half the ribcage. And about halfway down the pectorals are where the breasts start. 6)The hips are widest at the crotch. Men will usually have boxier/narrower hips than women. -Try to start with primitive forms like boxes in the future to make sure the body is in the right perspective. And don't be afraid redraw something from the side view to make sure the body is in a natural position and things are overlapping correctly. Hope this helps! You already insane tbh.
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