@um9s

Peindre

Your sense of perspective is really good! And your ability to put so many characters together in a believable scene is crazy! When I roughly mapped out a grid things lined up really well. I think the only really out of perspective character was the skeleton. I'm not sure if you did use a perspective grid, but if you did you'd notice that not all of your characters and faces lined up with the grid. I fixed a few to show you how they could have been improved. If you're not sure how to do a perspective grid when your horizon line and vanishing points are off the page, there are two things you can do: 1)Pretend your image was taken with a long angle lens. This means that your perspective grid and anything within it will have lines that are parallel and do NOT converge on a vanishing point. This is because the vanishing points and horizon line are so far away that you don't see where they eventually meet on the horizon line. A wide angle lens would be the opposite. 2)You can use the brewer method. You draw two perspective lines going in the same direction at different angles as depicted with A and B. You measure the distance between them on the side of your page (Or on a straight line you draw down the middle of your page). Then you use that measurement to find your where your next perspective line (C). Then you start the process over with lines going in the opposite direction to get your 2nd vanishing point!. There are guides on youtube if you're still confused. Hope any of this information helps!