@um9s

Peindre

It's looking pretty good so far! I'm sure you will probably fix these things yourself as you continue to draw but I will try to help! -It looks like you struggling with form a bit. In the first phase, your primitive forms are still a bit amorphous. Use more hard edges and really try to understand the actual shape and direction of the form and how it rotates in 3D space. Make sure to draw the center line of the body as that will also test whether or not you really know the forms you're actually drawing. Draw more contour lines! Demonstrate that you know how the form looks. -The breasts are a good example of how understanding the form would have helped you place them on top of the rib cage. Breasts are effected by gravity and won't push together naturally. Instead they'll spill over in the direction they're drooping. -It also looks like you didn't use your own guide when drawing the final pose? Make sure to try to follow the primitive forms as their foundation will help you in the long run. Other than paying attention to form, it might benefit you to study anatomy. (https://x.com/kato_anatomy/media) Kato_ anatomy has really good and simple references to look at if you are interested! But only if you want! The most important thing is to have fun while drawing. It should rarely if ever feel like a chore. I hope this helps!