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Peindre

Cool stuff! It's hard to give just a general tip because I'm sure a lot of the issues will just be solved as you continue to draw more, but I'll try to help! I think the best thing you could focus on is thinking about your drawings in 3D space. I noticed that all of your characters were flat and facing forward so all I did was rotate one of your characters slightly while abiding by the horizon line I drew in. You can see just how just adding a bit of depth can completely change the feel of an image. To do this, start by practicing drawing primitive forms in perspective, like cubes and cylinders. If that gets boring, draw a person from reference as primitive forms or try to find the horizon line in other images or even draw random blobs and then draw line around them to add form like I did above! Kim Jung Gi makes perspective really easy to understand. (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CGLIQvNk3zY)(https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WLCankVBt3Y) These videos in particular. Important things to keep in mind is that there are an infinite number of vanishing points and each object can have there own. Good luck and hope this helps!