@jazzyangel

“I just added what i usually see with plus sized people that i think you could take into consideration. I hope my notes are legible, but if u can’t read it please let me know!”

“I recommend looking at the silhouette of the piece, the issue seems to be with the left arm. I think despite the perspective the arm length is too short compared to the other arm.. Goodluck!”

“SPANISH GOOGLE TRANSLATION: El pulgar está en el lado equivocado. Un consejo artístico es que el pulgar siempre apunta hacia adentro, hacia el cuerpo, si no está torcido. La mano también está torcida ”

“Some small tips! The head is too big for the torso, so maybe scale it down a bit so she looks more proportional, i provided an example! And i think the left shoulder could be raised a little, thats al”