@silbrinn

“biggest thing would be picking where u want ur light coming from and go off of that darker areas would be where the light doesn’t hit”

“i would experiment with other eye shapes, add lines under the eyes and near the brows when needed and play with more expressive mouths”

“looks good so far! for clothes id add more variety to the colors and more layers rather than frills”

“face width looks fine, main issue is the top of the head is too large so id recommend shrinking it down :) keep the hair close to the base of the head”

“it looks super good i love the colors i would just change the neck placement because it is a little confusing and also just line stuff up a bit more”

“it looks super good! id add more shading and highlights especially on the face and eyes to help it pop out more”

“larger neck and move eyes nose and mouth towards center more! good start though :)”

“amazing drawing! i would just change the arm length and then shoulder and neck placement”

“drawing is super good! mostly just fixed the anatomy with the legs and torso :)”

“circles lines and squares help a lot when it comes to anatomy ! since he seems muscular id make the head smaller and chest, neck, and arms bigger to show that super good start though!”

“great start! a way to make him look more energetic would be to add to the pose dont be afraid to have a more square canvas so more can fit on it! hand on the hip, arm higher up and a happier facial ”

“i would make the eyes smaller and higher up face a little longer and shoulders more broad very nice start though!”

“this is a super good start! changes i made: -location of the mouth and nose since he seems to be looking down viewer (both would be higher as to show more chin) -neck is thicker i would also remo”

“its a good start i would just smoothen some things out make head higher, neck longer and thicker so it connects more to the back of head instead of under the ear”

“looks super good so far, i think the shoulders are fine, once you fix the neck and back it can help a lot with the whole piece head is circle and the neck will connect to it front of neck needs to”

“loved this drawing! most stuff would be a super easy fix :) boxes and lines always help me with anatomy just so you know where the hips are and where the chest is and how they will connect”

“very good start!! what helps me with eyes so u know if theyre too far apart or not close enough is if you could fit a third eye in between them. invisible third eye should fit perfectly in between the”

“good start! i would just adjust some stuff :) for clothing, using anime references on pinterest can help even if the style you’re drawing in isnt anime just because they show in a clearer easier to ”

“very good start! i would focus on body and how her limbs connect and then add the clothes afterwards (much easier!) pinterest has a lot of good references too when it comes to poses :)”

“very cute! things i would adjust since you want to focus on head would be moving the neck placement so it connects more with the head i changed the hair to look more like the reference provided sinc”